尘埃拾趣 发表于 2023-9-30 13:06:01

中秋月

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成老师 发表于 2023-9-30 15:34:50

拜读金老师佳作!

成老师 发表于 2023-9-30 15:35:15

每逢佳节倍思亲!

成老师 发表于 2023-9-30 15:36:29

诗歌韵律和谐,节奏感很强,读起来朗朗上口!

成老师 发表于 2023-9-30 15:36:57

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成老师 发表于 2023-9-30 15:37:18

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庸非(陈黎明) 发表于 2023-9-30 18:07:59

清清幽幽,明明亮亮,难以琢磨,女孩心事。愿时时眼前一亮,惊喜多多!

庸非(陈黎明) 发表于 2023-9-30 18:08:47

图片美极,教科书级水平!

伊月儿 发表于 2023-9-30 18:47:39

月亮很美

方言(岩) 发表于 2023-9-30 19:11:36

欣赏佳作!
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