楼红心 发表于 2023-10-5 03:47:59

残月

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成老师 发表于 2023-10-5 12:53:14

欣赏红心姐姐佳作！

成老师 发表于 2023-10-5 12:53:50

诗歌里流露出有点点感伤

成老师 发表于 2023-10-5 12:54:15

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成老师 发表于 2023-10-5 12:54:27

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一眼万年2023 发表于 2023-10-5 14:54:45

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细心的坛友 发表于 2023-10-5 15:49:33

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方言(岩) 发表于 2023-10-5 18:30:02

心有余思月变残，中秋之夜不成眠。
研墨运腕抒心致，素笺淡笔绘暮年。

洪其璜 发表于 2023-10-5 19:20:34

好诗！

红海蜃楼 发表于 2023-10-6 12:23:41

欣赏好作
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