江南一客 发表于 2023-10-10 21:04:36

临安秋雨:打油诗·读红海蜃楼先生《大隐隐于柿》戏作

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <h3><em><strong>打油诗&middot;读红海蜃楼先生《大隐隐于柿》戏作</strong></em></h3><p>&nbsp;</p><h3><em><strong>⊙临安秋雨</strong></em></h3><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20231010210407front2_0_1060230_Fk8vVbj9R24Q653VeN8XInjnhbe0.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="354" height="235" data-qf-origin="forum/20231010210407front2_0_1060230_Fk8vVbj9R24Q653VeN8XInjnhbe0.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>东坪村舍柿树成荫,</p><p>岁月静好。</p><p>屋前路边枝头殷红,</p><p>红柿如灯笼挂在枝头,</p><p>点点繁星般闪烁,玲珑可爱让人心醉,</p><p>诱人美味信手可得。</p><p>农家小院竹簟晒,</p><p>柿子个个像脸蛋。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>东坪村头柿子树下,</p><p>宁静致远。</p><p>秋霜至叶子光,</p><p>岁月荏苒皆过客,</p><p>繁华落尽岁月如梭,</p><p>霜降柿子更柔情。</p><p>这一份美好,</p><p>这一份甜蜜,</p><p>让人心醉。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>(临安秋雨,20231010,义乌)</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20231010210415front2_0_1060230_Fk9AvZ0fN49uIiZqkKX0XGTg3zts.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="181" height="233" data-qf-origin="forum/20231010210415front2_0_1060230_Fk9AvZ0fN49uIiZqkKX0XGTg3zts.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p><em><strong>红海蜃楼先生《大隐隐于柿》文中说:</strong></em></p><p>东坪村的房前屋后,山坡田埂,路边地头,都种着柿树。后山坡上成片的柿林,挤挤挨挨,墨绿的叶子望去一碧绿涛。点点红柿子隐隐约约地挂在树枝,如繁星闪烁在碧空。屋前路边的树上,柿子压弯了枝条,一个个殷红的柿子,站在树下就可开口咬食&mdash;&mdash;如果你不怕涩口的话。树下也有落下几个成熟的柿子,裂开了口子,露出了美味鲜艳的肉质,口水情不自禁地流出。那一个个鲜红的柿子好像一个个小红灯笼,挂在树枝,玲珑可爱。站在观景台,坐在长廊亭,漫步在村边小径,远望群山巍峨,翠竹海涛,近观金稻绿禾,红柿殷实,耳听山鸟欢唱,鸡鸭啼鸣,嗅闻山风送来的瓜果蔬菜的清香,身心浸泡在如此美丽的自然。</p>    <!----></div>            

成老师 发表于 2023-10-10 21:14:35

拜读了!

成老师 发表于 2023-10-10 21:15:12

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红海蜃楼 发表于 2023-10-11 17:23:19

谢谢老师。佳作欣赏

楼红心 发表于 2023-10-11 17:45:19

拜读佳作!
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