江南一客 发表于 2023-10-10 21:17:18

临安秋雨·顺口溜·读红海蜃楼先生《大隐隐于柿》戏作

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <h3><em><strong>顺口溜&middot;读红海蜃楼先生《大隐隐于柿》戏作</strong></em></h3><h3>&nbsp;</h3><h3><em><strong>⊙临安秋雨</strong></em></h3><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20231010210752front2_0_1060230_FvmOFmvMC1TCMgmVbaTq-o9IbBVP.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="299" height="205" data-qf-origin="forum/20231010210752front2_0_1060230_FvmOFmvMC1TCMgmVbaTq-o9IbBVP.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><h3>&nbsp;</h3><p>老屋旁。</p><p>柿树下。</p><p>我静静地坐着,</p><p>沉浸在这秋实的时刻。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>清风吹过脸庞,</p><p>抚平了内心的忧伤,</p><p>树叶沙沙作响,</p><p>仿佛在为我轻唱。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>远处山峦叠嶂,</p><p>近处田野绿意盎然。</p><p>我望着柿子树,</p><p>思绪万千,心情舒缓。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>这一刻,</p><p>世界仿佛静止了,</p><p>只有我和这片山野,</p><p>彼此互诉心声。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>柿子树下,</p><p>找到了自己,</p><p>也找到了与自然的联系,</p><p>心中充满感激。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>愿这瞬间,</p><p>能永远定格在我心间,</p><p>成为我生命中的宝藏,</p><p>永远不会消逝。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>(临安秋雨,20231010,义乌)</p>    <!----></div>            

成老师 发表于 2023-10-10 21:58:14

拜读了!

成老师 发表于 2023-10-10 21:58:35

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红海蜃楼 发表于 2023-10-11 17:21:09

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红海蜃楼 发表于 2023-10-11 17:21:35

老师的诗真美!谢谢

楼红心 发表于 2023-10-11 17:40:39

拜读老师佳作!

富安神 发表于 2023-10-11 19:52:34

晚上好!
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