心想事成2000 发表于 2023-10-22 20:31:57

江南长城

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方言(岩) 发表于 2023-10-22 22:02:28

拜读长诗心激情澎湃。心里很向往,可惜两次临海均没去成。真的很遗憾呀!下次我个人再去,补上!

墨香醉 发表于 2023-10-22 22:12:22

诗歌以形象生动的语言描绘了长城的壮丽景观和历史传奇,展现了长城作为中国文化的象征和人们对其的敬仰之情。通过描写长城的历史和英雄故事,表达了对长城的敬意和对历史的思考,同时也展现了对江南美景的赞美和对大好河山的热爱之情。

墨香醉 发表于 2023-10-22 22:12:54

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墨香醉 发表于 2023-10-22 22:18:16

快手小芳灵感爆棚,才思敏捷,太厉害了。

满仓 发表于 2023-10-22 23:53:53

路过

成老师 发表于 2023-10-23 03:41:31

才思敏捷,灵感泉涌,采风活动还没结束,诗歌就出来了,好厉害啊:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2023-10-23 03:41:45

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成老师 发表于 2023-10-23 03:42:11

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成老师 发表于 2023-10-23 03:42:27

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