赵安平诗歌 对联·轱辘对
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靠岸归舟待客来
黄昏已过无归燕
秋色空山有彩云
归舟靠岸催征马
已过黄昏恋故乡 拜读了! https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 修改了一下,推出“轱辘对”新谓 名词对名词动词对动词,形容词对形容词,还有平仄押韵。赵老师这样对否? 佳对欣赏! 不妥 舟≠过
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