德胜岩南
发表于 2023-10-26 17:24:51
癸卯重阳节词二首
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成老师
发表于 2023-10-26 18:17:39
欣赏杨老师佳作！
大美北苑
发表于 2023-10-26 18:30:03
拜读佳作！
冯康
发表于 2023-10-26 19:34:53
http://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1
冯康
发表于 2023-10-26 19:36:56
杨兄的诗作读来别有一番韵味，学习了
方言(岩)
发表于 2023-10-26 20:11:06
欣赏好词！
庸非（陈黎明）
发表于 2023-10-26 21:29:04
露肥绿瘦:lol
德胜岩南
发表于 2023-10-27 19:03:51
回复了这么多，一个都显示不出来，玩不下去了:lol:lol
神州大呼一鸥
发表于 2023-10-27 20:08:49
http://pics.app.cnyw.net/_20191205141840_5de8a140e1a27.png送出喝茶x1
德胜岩南
发表于 2023-10-28 07:51:54
现在知道了，回复坛友的评论须隔一天才能出来，硬生生熬成隔夜茶:lol:lol