栏杆倚遍 发表于 2023-11-2 15:12:07

晚秋

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-2 16:35:51

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-2 16:36:32

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-2 16:36:49

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零壹空间 发表于 2023-11-2 18:07:09

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-6 04:07:38

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庸非（陈黎明） 发表于 2023-12-20 19:39:22

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方言(岩) 发表于 2023-12-20 22:14:50

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墨香醉 发表于 2023-12-20 23:07:40

作者深情地描绘了晚秋景色的壮美，诗意深邃，情感丰富通过对比自然景物与人物情怀，表达了诗人对于人生行动和价值的思考

墨香醉 发表于 2023-12-20 23:09:43

有点深奥，其中古典典故和意象可能需要读者具备一定文化背景才能完全领会。
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