德胜岩南
发表于 2023-11-5 12:13:08
浣溪沙·荷塘月色
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雨音
发表于 2023-11-5 12:35:23
高手出手，惊艳佳作！欣赏学习
成老师
发表于 2023-11-5 12:51:11
欣赏学习杨老师的诗作！
成老师
发表于 2023-11-5 12:51:26
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成老师
发表于 2023-11-5 12:51:39
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高高山
发表于 2023-11-5 13:07:54
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信华
发表于 2023-11-5 17:33:29
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洪其璜
发表于 2023-11-5 19:39:49
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冯康
发表于 2023-11-5 20:19:21
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冯康
发表于 2023-11-5 20:20:01
高手啊