陶志杨 发表于 2023-11-7 10:34:39

七律，暮秋晨吟

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-7 11:19:11

拜读陶老师佳作！:hug::hug::hug::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2023-11-7 11:19:25

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成老师 发表于 2023-11-7 11:19:38

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洪其璜 发表于 2023-11-7 16:00:33

好律，学习了！

一眼万年2023 发表于 2023-11-7 16:47:15

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方言(岩) 发表于 2023-11-7 19:00:06

好律！学习了！
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