富安神 发表于 2023-12-8 15:25:03

七绝.无题.新韵

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-8 15:28:55

拜读了神兄诗作！

成老师 发表于 2023-12-8 15:29:15

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闲语 发表于 2023-12-8 18:21:00

晚上好

张月月 发表于 2023-12-8 18:38:54

诗人晚上好

墨香醉 发表于 2023-12-8 20:23:11

诗歌简明扼要，韵美意丰，令人感同身受，曾经的愿望与现实的差距，单纯的思想总被现实所吞噬，经历沧桑巨变后才有了的成长和新的认识。

yingyingwu 发表于 2023-12-10 15:29:14

神兄笔耕不辍，欣赏学习！
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