问鹅有感
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p> </p><p>问鹅有感</p><p> </p><p>文/庸非</p><p> </p><p>伸张长颈鹿般的脖</p><p>把嘴顶上云顶</p><p>掂起两支船桨</p><p>一脸的好奇</p><p>问客从哪来</p><p>问客干什么</p><p> </p><p>噶噶噶</p><p>咔咔咔</p><p> </p><p>游人好奇的摁下快门</p><p>算作回答</p><p>却又疑问</p><p>这鸭好大哎</p><p> </p><p>如今干净</p><p>到田埂地头</p><p>莫说闹街市</p><p>除了鸟雀没法圈养</p><p>所有家禽</p><p>都已消失视线</p><p> </p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240102154954front2_0_1011626_njr_rCbnbw5zLIdv7Oja1fsRW2HO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="3472" height="4624" data-qf-origin="forum/20240102154954front2_0_1011626_njr_rCbnbw5zLIdv7Oja1fsRW2HO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240102154954front2_0_1011626_njr_rCbnbw5zLIdv7Oja1fsRW2HO.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20240102154954front2_0_1011626_njr_rCbnbw5zLIdv7Oja1fsRW2HO.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p> <!----></div> 看到楼洪民文里的鹅照，突有所感。如今鸭鹅分不清，以后狼狈狗猫虎也是一脑子糊涂了。[捂脸] 生活气息浓厚！ 生活气息浓厚，但是文学是源于生活、高于生活，生活素材需要提练、加工才能成为文学。絮我直言，这首诗歌还需要好好提练，好好加工！
文学不是现实生活的搬运工！
个人建议，仅供参考！
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