金襄 发表于 2024-1-22 17:39:28

【现代诗鉴赏】雪的思想（外一首）

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金襄 发表于 2024-1-22 17:53:47

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成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 17:54:27

欣赏金大侠佳作:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 17:54:46

瑞雪兆丰年！

成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 17:55:21

妙雪将圣洁奉献给人类的眼睛！

成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 17:55:31

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成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 17:55:46

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成老师 发表于 2024-1-22 18:13:03

一片一片又一片，
两片三片四五片，
六片七片八九片，
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