刘德贤 发表于 2024-3-21 22:40:17

水乡的春天

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成老师 发表于 2024-3-22 03:07:30

欣赏学习！

成老师 发表于 2024-3-22 03:08:37

建议最后一句修改一下，配合二、四句的韵！

成老师 发表于 2024-3-22 03:08:56

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

健康快乐生活 发表于 2024-3-22 08:30:52

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成老师 发表于 2024-3-22 18:03:00

水乡人家，好美好美！

义乌辽鹤 发表于 2024-3-22 20:10:29

学习，点赞佳佳文！

义乌辽鹤 发表于 2024-3-23 16:59:56

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