鲁鲁小湿：金昌蒲
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010503" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010503"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <h2><strong>鲁鲁小湿丨诗歌：金昌蒲</strong></h2><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240324125226front2_0_1060230_Fu_YuioQ3imSwG1G9pnEm-hWAIIf.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="684" height="912" data-qf-origin="forum/20240324125226front2_0_1060230_Fu_YuioQ3imSwG1G9pnEm-hWAIIf.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240324125226front2_0_1060230_Ftc8Li6Uq6Zy8WvIR_eNK885-XQ7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="684" height="912" data-qf-origin="forum/20240324125226front2_0_1060230_Ftc8Li6Uq6Zy8WvIR_eNK885-XQ7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p data-track="1">⊙金钱蒲</p><p data-track="18">手触摸金钱蒲之后香气长时间不散，因此又被称为“随手香”，民间俗称“菖蒲”。</p><p data-track="19">金钱蒲常绿而具光泽，生性强健，能适应湿润，特别是阴凉的环境，多做文房清供，深受历代文人雅客所喜爱。</p><p data-track="20">清明节前乡野散步，溪中多此小草翠绿可爱。</p><p> </p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240324125100front2_0_1060230_Fl-kaqrf9MBLi8blRPkfR4k1drOk.png?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="590" height="1280" data-qf-origin="forum/20240324125100front2_0_1060230_Fl-kaqrf9MBLi8blRPkfR4k1drOk.png?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><h2 data-track="9"><strong>翠叶轻摇映溪水，</strong></h2><h2 data-track="5"><strong>幽香阵阵沁心房。</strong></h2><h2 data-track="2"><strong>清风拂面心神爽，</strong></h2><h2 data-track="6"><strong>细雨沾衣夫妻长。</strong></h2><h2 data-track="3"><strong>山色朦胧笼碧影，</strong></h2><h2 data-track="7"><strong>烟火袅袅映清光。</strong></h2><h2 data-track="4"><strong>闲来静坐观花影，</strong></h2><h2 data-track="8"><strong>流水欢歌金菖蒲。</strong></h2><h2 class="empty_paragraph"><strong> </strong></h2><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240324125127front2_0_1060230_FjyuWE1JxN9QDEYonwY8YqNItDBf.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="684" height="912" data-qf-origin="forum/20240324125127front2_0_1060230_FjyuWE1JxN9QDEYonwY8YqNItDBf.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240324125127front2_0_1060230_Fs0XdWPpBTasMR89U3_jffj20sm7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="684" height="912" data-qf-origin="forum/20240324125127front2_0_1060230_Fs0XdWPpBTasMR89U3_jffj20sm7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong>⊙胡首知点评</strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph" data-track="13"> </p><p>这首诗的艺术价值体现在多个方面，从语言到意境，从情感到哲理，都展现出了诗人的才华和对生活的深刻洞察。</p><p> </p><p>从语言上看，诗人运用了一系列形象生动的词汇和比喻，如“翠叶轻摇映溪水”、“幽香阵阵沁心房”等，使得整首诗充满了画面感和感官体验。同时，诗人还注重音韵的和谐，使得诗句读起来朗朗上口，富有音乐性。</p><p> </p><p>意境方面，诗人通过对自然景物的描绘，构建了一个清新、宁静、和谐的意境。</p><p>无论是摇曳的翠叶、清澈的溪水，还是朦胧的山色、袅袅的烟火，都让人感受到大自然的美丽和生命的活力。这种意境的营造，不仅展现了诗人的审美情趣，也引导读者在忙碌的生活中找到内心的宁静和平衡。</p><p> </p><p>而从情感上看，诗人通过描绘自然景物和日常生活场景，表达了对生活的热爱和对美好情感的向往。</p><p>无论是“清风拂面心神爽”的愉悦，还是“细雨沾衣夫妻长”的温馨，都让人感受到诗人对生活的细腻观察和深刻体验。这种情感的表达，使得诗歌具有了更强的感染力和共鸣力。</p><p> </p><p>这首诗在哲理上，也蕴含了深刻的道理。</p><p>如“山色朦胧笼碧影”一句，不仅描绘了山色的美丽，也暗示了生活的复杂和多变；“闲来静坐观花影”一句，则表达了诗人对生活的淡定和从容。这些哲理的蕴含，使得诗歌具有了更深层次的内涵和价值。</p><p> </p><p>综上所述，这首诗具有较高的艺术价值，不仅语言优美、意境深远，而且情感真挚、哲理深刻。它不仅能够给读者带来美的享受，也能够引发读者的思考和感悟。</p> <!----></div> 欣赏学习！ https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 最后一句想办法与前面押韵，就很完美！ 看了看 :lol:lol:lol:lol:lol 翠叶轻摇映溪水，幽香阵阵沁心房。
清风拂面心神爽，
细雨沾衣夫妻长。
山色朦胧笼碧影，
烟火袅袅映清光。
闲来静坐观花影，
菖蒲清歌流水欢。
:lol:lol:lol 欣赏学习！
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