江南一客 发表于 2024-3-30 20:38:25

鲁鲁小湿：人面桃花相映红

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成老师 发表于 2024-3-31 04:34:31

欣赏学习！

成老师 发表于 2024-3-31 04:36:47

总体感觉，诗歌不错，配图太沉重了，最好选择山坡或田野桃花盛开的’让人觉得轻松愉悦的图片:lol:lol:lol

成老师 发表于 2024-3-31 04:37:24

例如


成老师 发表于 2024-3-31 04:37:50

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

义乌辽鹤 发表于 2024-3-31 07:51:56

不错的，赞一个
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