庸非(陈黎明) 发表于 2024-6-12 10:47:07

旅行(即兴作)

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成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:40:32

说走就走,向着快乐出发!:lol:lol:lol

成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:42:16

向着快乐出发
文/成江银

飞快地跟着
一手推开门
东边扯一片彩云
西边搞几朵栀子花
一手推着旅行包
高声招呼左邻右舍

寂静的村里
顿时热闹非凡
邻里们探出脑壳
应声道:别急,别急
待会我们一起都潇洒去

廊桥上古亭边
一群少年拨弹着吉它
唱着悠扬悦耳的歌曲
为时尚的大娘大妈送行
朝霞晕染了村口
一群快乐的人即将远行

即兴@何吴生@庸非[呲牙][呲牙][呲牙]

成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:42:44

马上出发

成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:42:55

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:43:30

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

成老师 发表于 2024-6-12 11:57:08

向着快乐出发
文/成江银

飞快地跟着
一手推开门
东边扯一片彩云
西边搞几朵栀子花
一手推着旅行包
高声招呼左邻右舍

寂静的村里
顿时热闹非凡
邻里们探出脑壳
应声道:别急,别急
待会我们一起都潇洒去

廊桥上古亭边
一群少年拨弹着吉它
唱着悠扬悦耳的歌曲
为时尚的大娘大妈送行
朝霞晕染了村口
一群快乐的人即将出发


墨香醉 发表于 2024-6-12 12:40:56

诗歌生动描绘了外来者来到山村后的场景,富有生活气息和画面感

智慧八方 发表于 2024-6-12 21:02:04

http://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1

富安神 发表于 2024-6-22 08:24:03

早上好!
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