杰克猫王 发表于 2024-7-30 14:20:08

“东方之辰杯”+东方之辰幼儿园歌

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成老师 发表于 2024-7-30 15:32:20

欣赏猫王的征文作品！

成老师 发表于 2024-7-30 15:34:40

配图欠妥当，配图应该配合作品的内容，达到锦上添花的作用！

是否凑空找一下换一张？

成老师 发表于 2024-7-30 15:34:53

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

成老师 发表于 2024-7-30 15:36:06

排版稍微有点欠缺，是否挤点时间，适当调整一下？
个人建议，仅供参考

陈静老师 发表于 2024-7-30 15:45:03

你真棒

大美北苑 发表于 2024-7-30 16:01:49

欣赏学习！

楠伲 发表于 2024-7-30 17:33:06

好诗，欣赏学习。

洪其璜 发表于 2024-7-30 18:26:49

方老师的园歌有水平！

高高山 发表于 2024-7-30 22:09:23

好文学习之！
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