智慧八方 发表于 2024-8-31 13:07:04

东方之辰，紫薇花开

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p class="qf_image big noneditable " style="position: relative;" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240831130528front1_0_691024_FtJiqUzwZA0gYGPljkAxIpK_cOn6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1620" data-qf-origin="forum/20240831130528front1_0_691024_FtJiqUzwZA0gYGPljkAxIpK_cOn6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="">在东方之辰幼儿园里，</p><p class="">紫薇花绽放如梦幻的霞。</p><p>一团团，一簇簇，</p><p>摇曳在微风下。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>那粉嫩的花瓣，</p><p>像孩子纯真的脸颊。</p><p>笑迎阳光雨露，</p><p>伴着童真长大。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240831130236front1_0_691024_FiiWsES6PWdRvxgbCJQjs4RGo0J6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1920" data-qf-origin="forum/20240831130236front1_0_691024_FiiWsES6PWdRvxgbCJQjs4RGo0J6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>紫薇花啊紫薇花，</p><p>你是园中的诗画。</p><p>装点着快乐的城堡，</p><p>守护着希望的芽。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>岁月流转中，</p><p>你静静不喧哗。</p><p>用温柔的色彩，</p><p>染亮每一个春夏。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240831130253front1_0_691024_FlEFSnS-f74v-EtwMyBHwjfj0msZ.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1920" data-qf-origin="forum/20240831130253front1_0_691024_FlEFSnS-f74v-EtwMyBHwjfj0msZ.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

成老师 发表于 2024-8-31 13:49:46

欣赏八方老师佳作，超赞:victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2024-8-31 13:50:41

诗中比喻生动形象，拟人手法运用恰到好处

成老师 发表于 2024-8-31 13:51:33

诗歌韵律和谐，节奏感很强

成老师 发表于 2024-8-31 13:51:44

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

成老师 发表于 2024-8-31 13:52:08

https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1

陈静老师 发表于 2024-8-31 14:40:11

夏日的那一抹好，正艳真美真灿烂！

细心的坛友 发表于 2024-8-31 17:44:41

:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol

超凡人生 发表于 2024-8-31 21:42:53

:):)

杰克猫王 发表于 2024-9-1 10:27:00

超有才华的诗歌！
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