方言(岩) 发表于 2024-9-2 13:28:53

眼儿媚·寻觅 方向明

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240902132450front2_0_809888_FrXFSrlFMXklRo6XtOiGHkyy6cXe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="616" height="395" data-qf-origin="forum/20240902132450front2_0_809888_FrXFSrlFMXklRo6XtOiGHkyy6cXe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240902132450front2_0_809888_FrXFSrlFMXklRo6XtOiGHkyy6cXe.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20240902132450front2_0_809888_FrXFSrlFMXklRo6XtOiGHkyy6cXe.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p>天路迢迢觅芳踪,烟雨锁朦胧。千山踏遍,万溪寻过,心事重重。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>林间花落声声慢,曾似旧时风。梦回何处,云深不见,今世难逢。</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240902132553front2_0_809888_FsCg3Kf81jJhsXyg6-7gxwQuaF5_.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1024" height="1280" data-qf-origin="forum/20240902132553front2_0_809888_FsCg3Kf81jJhsXyg6-7gxwQuaF5_.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>作品赏析:&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 这首《眼儿媚》以细腻温婉的笔触,勾勒出一幅寻觅之路的凄美画卷。词中&ldquo;天路迢迢觅芳踪,烟雨锁朦胧&rdquo;,开篇即营造出一种迷茫而深远的氛围。暗示着作者在漫长旅途中对美好愿景的执着追寻,却因烟雨的遮蔽而显得朦胧难辨。&ldquo;千山踏遍,万溪寻过&rdquo;,展现了作者不畏艰难、勇往直前的决心,同时也透露出旅途的艰辛与孤独。</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &ldquo;林间花落声声慢,曾似旧时风&rdquo;,通过落花与风的意象,巧妙地融入了对过往岁月的怀念与感慨。那份淡淡的忧伤与失落,如同落花般悄无声息地弥漫开来。最后三句&ldquo;梦回何处,云深不见,今世难逢&rdquo;,则将情感推向高潮,表达了作者在寻觅过程中,面对未知与迷茫的深深无奈与惆怅。归途似被重重云雾笼罩,难以寻觅,引人深思。整首词情感丰富,意境深远,令人回味无穷。(天方明语&nbsp; 点评)</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240902132802front2_0_809888_FuRTiS2-gG97be8ha8sgtsEvcPLH.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="600" height="600" data-qf-origin="forum/20240902132802front2_0_809888_FuRTiS2-gG97be8ha8sgtsEvcPLH.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240902132803front2_0_809888_Fur_z2zgtC8W_L_HdJOYUha22W_h.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="640" height="425" data-qf-origin="forum/20240902132803front2_0_809888_Fur_z2zgtC8W_L_HdJOYUha22W_h.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

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