庸非（陈黎明） 发表于 2025-9-24 00:56:41

蟹形山守夜

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大美北苑 发表于 2025-9-24 09:54:55

助力乡村振兴，助力村民共同富裕，利在当代，功垂千秋！

胡疏影 发表于 2025-9-24 14:53:10

这首诗意象丰富且富有深意。“青铜根系”象征历史底蕴，以村民脊背挡“抗战收割”，用墓碑“鱼类沉默”，写抗战伤痛与坚韧。“红流”“卧象山弓脊梁”“顶明朝月光”，融合历史与革命，凸显力量传承。以“陶俑握未出鞘铮鸣”“昆仑雪水站岗”，喻精神如昆仑坚毅。结尾“新绸缎覆古战场”，写时代变迁，墓群听“盛世瓷器”“戚家军酒坛星群”，表达对先辈敬意及盛世告慰，整体借古思今，富有历史纵深感与精神厚度！学习了。

烏傷桕客 发表于 2025-9-24 15:08:59

戚家军酒坛

张月月 发表于 2025-9-26 13:33:22

点赞，中午好

张月月 发表于 2025-9-26 13:33:33

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