楼红心 发表于 2023-12-16 14:08:43

初雪

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-16 14:25:37

欣赏红心姐姐诗作！

成老师 发表于 2023-12-16 14:26:11

拟人手法运用恰到好处！

成老师 发表于 2023-12-16 14:26:29

忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开！

成老师 发表于 2023-12-16 14:26:43

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-16 14:26:58

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凡人望乡 发表于 2023-12-16 15:09:10

只缘那一份守候…

高高山 发表于 2023-12-16 16:17:27

优秀佳作，欣赏支持！

高高山 发表于 2023-12-16 16:17:46

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文军门业 发表于 2023-12-16 16:21:49

这才是诗哦
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