大漠之狼 发表于 2023-12-23 06:50:56

夕阳笼罩下的‘花环’

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:01:29

欣赏狼哥的诗作!:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:03:10

拟人手法运用恰到好处,增强了诗歌的渲染力和感染力!:victory::victory::victory::handshake:handshake:handshake

成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:03:26

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:03:38

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:04:36

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成老师 发表于 2023-12-23 07:06:57

近几天天气好冷,特别注意保暖哦!

乌伤懒人 发表于 2023-12-23 07:11:31

漂亮

强头 发表于 2023-12-23 07:25:09

好!
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