鲁鲁小湿：雪峰故里神坛村
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010503" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010503"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240404211705front2_0_1060230_FpONnjfFcHbRVsxgzBYcyBy0MVdn.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1152" height="864" data-qf-origin="forum/20240404211705front2_0_1060230_FpONnjfFcHbRVsxgzBYcyBy0MVdn.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>清明时节思雪峰，神坛故里如梦境。</p><p>故居门前雪松立，翠竹挺立比高洁。</p><p>天井铜像映日辉，如烛照心映辉煌。</p><p>三块卵石品字排，坚如磐石历风霜。</p><p>雪峰故里神坛村，鲜花敬献似繁星。</p><p>清明时节话文学，墨香四溢如泉涌。</p><p>文朋好友心相映，情深似海意绵长。</p><p>学术交流意绵绵，智慧碰撞火花闪。</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240404211744front2_0_1060230_FmYvu4tOlYCP8wzlPN3m769B8YjM.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1152" height="864" data-qf-origin="forum/20240404211744front2_0_1060230_FmYvu4tOlYCP8wzlPN3m769B8YjM.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong>⊙胡首知点评：</strong></p><p> </p><p>这首诗革命情怀，不言而喻的。而通过比喻来丰富和深化诗句的意象，是其特色。</p><p> </p><p>“故居门前雪松立，翠竹挺立比高洁”这一句中，将雪松比喻为翠竹，以表现其高洁挺立的气质；</p><p>“天井铜像映日辉，如烛照心映辉煌”则将铜像比喻为照亮内心的烛火，寓意其精神之光照亮人心；</p><p>“鲜花敬献似繁星”将敬献的鲜花比喻为繁星，寓意对英雄的敬仰如同繁星点点，璀璨夺目；</p><p>“墨香四溢如泉涌”则将文学的墨香比喻为泉水，象征其源源不断，清新怡人；</p><p>“文朋好友心相映，情深似海意绵长”将友情比作深海，形容其深邃且持久；</p><p>“智慧碰撞火花闪”则将学术交流中的智慧碰撞比喻为火花闪烁，形象地展现了学术交流中思想的激烈碰撞和灵感的闪现。</p><p> </p><p>这些比喻的加入，不仅丰富了诗句的意象，也使得诗句的表达，更加生动和有力。这是当代新格律诗常用的手法，只不过《雪峰故里神坛村》，用的更巧妙。</p> <!----></div> 欣赏学习 https://pics.app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1
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