颂义乌松瀑山瀑布
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/></p><p><strong>尘世喧嚣扰心渊，</strong></p><p><strong>瀑音清越净尘缘。</strong></p><p><strong>云浮峰顶幻仙境，</strong></p><p><strong>笑语欢歌绕绿峦。</strong></p><p><strong>秩序井然遵德范，</strong></p><p><strong>街衢洁净焕新颜。</strong></p><p><strong>寻幽探秘逐流水，</strong></p><p><strong>光影斑斓舞彩弦。</strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141336front2_0_973190_FtEkgkR_8XqbRVSjQsS3a7NVFLIw.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="675" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141336front2_0_973190_FtEkgkR_8XqbRVSjQsS3a7NVFLIw.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141336front2_0_973190_Fm7PKiUuD7-1JYK7m3Ndxv2JYLyj.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="725" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141336front2_0_973190_Fm7PKiUuD7-1JYK7m3Ndxv2JYLyj.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong> 雨过山川翠色添，</strong></p><p><strong>瀑布垂帘挂前川。</strong></p><p><strong>诗涵雅意情如水，</strong></p><p><strong>水奏清音入耳帘。</strong></p><p><strong>玉练垂空舞素辉，</strong></p><p><strong>清韵悠扬映心扉。</strong></p><p><strong>飞瀑溅珠滋肺腑，</strong></p><p><strong>神怡心旷化飞仙。</strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph"><strong> </strong></p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img 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data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141502front2_0_973190_FpvRJ2ACt21ok8rd-dT5JumIa4mx.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong> 龙腾水舞映云端，</strong></p><p><strong>激流飞泻溅玉颜。</strong></p><p><strong>游客争抢摄梦幻，</strong></p><p><strong>水沫飘洒湿衣衫。</strong></p><p><strong>犬吠林间添逸趣，</strong></p><p><strong>鸟语婉转乐悠然。</strong></p><p><strong>峻岭崔嵬藏巨字，</strong></p><p><strong>峡谷幽深展壮观。</strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph"><strong> </strong></p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141553front2_0_973190_FgFr37dE6_PU4bNdGvkDof2g_Qo8.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="1024" 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</p><p><strong>轻纱薄雾掩流泉，</strong></p><p><strong>密树浓阴水汩然。</strong></p><p><strong>溪水潺潺弹雅曲，</strong></p><p><strong>斜阳灿灿镶金边。</strong></p><p><strong>层峦飞瀑如银练，</strong></p><p><strong>胜境仙姿醉眸前。</strong></p><p><strong>瀑幕高悬显大略，</strong></p><p><strong>贤才风范映心田。 </strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph"><strong> </strong></p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141711front2_0_973190_FtEkgkR_8XqbRVSjQsS3a7NVFLIw.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="675" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141711front2_0_973190_FtEkgkR_8XqbRVSjQsS3a7NVFLIw.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141711front2_0_973190_FuQc9srou4qa6jh7Z7BqKTfBT6qz.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="1024" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141711front2_0_973190_FuQc9srou4qa6jh7Z7BqKTfBT6qz.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong>登高望远意悠远，</strong></p><p><strong>瀑水奔腾情未阑。</strong></p><p><strong>急浪勇驰无所惧，</strong></p><p><strong>流年变幻志如磐。</strong></p><p><strong>风光如画入诗卷，</strong></p><p><strong>事理如禅悟道参。</strong></p><p><strong>人生起伏似飞瀑，</strong></p><p><strong>勇攀高峰破雾岚。</strong></p><p class="empty_paragraph"><strong> </strong></p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141801front2_0_973190_FmDzVk1LsqUedFzJCXfizB82hM3K.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="720" height="797" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141801front2_0_973190_FmDzVk1LsqUedFzJCXfizB82hM3K.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141801front2_0_973190_Fu4kig5pOU-uJAJQuMwWwHqTLBvp.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="753" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141801front2_0_973190_Fu4kig5pOU-uJAJQuMwWwHqTLBvp.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p><strong>诗歌鉴赏 </strong> </p><p> 这首《颂义乌松瀑山瀑布》不仅描绘了瀑布的壮丽景色，还融入了诗人的情感和思考，展现了诗人对自然与人生的独特感悟。以下是对这首诗的多角度鉴赏：</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425142229front2_0_973190_FjEC3o9lbOt1yxcyadVs0C7Q1NrK.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="874" height="872" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425142229front2_0_973190_FjEC3o9lbOt1yxcyadVs0C7Q1NrK.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>一、结构与音韵 </p><p> 诗的结构清晰,分为五段,每段四句,构成了一个完整且和谐的篇章。每段的主题各有不同,从瀑布的音响、形态到瀑布周围的环境,再到诗人的情感与哲理思考,层层递进,展现了瀑布的多重魅力。 </p><p> 在音韵上,这首诗的押韵处理得相当出色,每段的结尾都采用了押韵的方式,使得整首诗在朗读时具有优美的节奏感和韵律美。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141842front2_0_973190_FnZWlWPiYikiq_0E3m9cGJT8_Eb4.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="646" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141842front2_0_973190_FnZWlWPiYikiq_0E3m9cGJT8_Eb4.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>二、意象与描绘 </p><p> 通过丰富的意象和生动的描绘,将瀑布的壮丽景色展现得淋漓尽致。如</p><p>“玉练垂空舞素辉”,“层峦飞瀑如银练”,这些生动的比喻和描绘，让读者仿佛置身瀑布前，亲身感受其壮美。同时，诗人还通过对瀑布周围环境的描绘,如“云浮峰顶幻仙境”,“密树浓阴水汩然”,展现了瀑布所处环境的宁静与幽深。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141951front2_0_973190_Fjjf26Cat33HhL8HAamShpR1bn1q.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="1024" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141951front2_0_973190_Fjjf26Cat33HhL8HAamShpR1bn1q.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>三、情感与思考 </p><p> 诗人在描绘瀑布的同时,也融入了自己的情感和思考。如“尘世喧嚣扰心渊，瀑音清越净尘缘”,作者用瀑布的清净之美与尘世的喧嚣作对比,表达了对清净生活的向往；“人生起伏似飞瀑，勇攀高峰破雾岚”,则通过比喻人生起伏与攀登高峰的过程,鼓励人们要勇敢面对生活中的困难和挑战。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425141920front2_0_973190_Fji0Fr8M13FKWhss_27babC677rp.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="720" height="914" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425141920front2_0_973190_Fji0Fr8M13FKWhss_27babC677rp.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MuYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>四、艺术风格 </p><p> 这首诗艺术风格独特，语言优美、意境深远，既体现作者对自然景观的赞美,又展示对人生哲理的深入思考。同时，诗中运用各种修辞手法，如比喻、拟人等，使得诗歌更具艺术感染力。 </p><p> </p><p> </p><p><video class="qf_video" preload="none" style="background-color: black; height: 273.6842105263158px; width: 364px;" src="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425142704front2_1_973190_nj55dHHn2LNBFXlHBVuilqUX7MNx_with_logo.mp4" poster="https://pics.app.cnyw.net/forum/20240425142704front2_1_973190_nj55dHHn2LNBFXlHBVuilqUX7MNx_with_logo.mp4?vframe/png/offset/0" controls="controls" width="544" height="960" frameborder="0" data-qf-origin="forum/20240425142704front2_1_973190_nj55dHHn2LNBFXlHBVuilqUX7MNx_with_logo.mp4" data-qf-poster-origin="forum/20240425142704front2_1_973190_nj55dHHn2LNBFXlHBVuilqUX7MNx_with_logo.mp4?vframe/png/offset/0" 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