栏杆倚遍 发表于 2024-10-25 13:35:51

舞杨花·晨起有思

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张红英 发表于 2024-10-25 13:42:14

好好好

成老师 发表于 2024-10-25 14:02:59

欣赏张老师佳作！

成老师 发表于 2024-10-25 14:03:25

张老师每天创作勤奋，作品大丰收！

成老师 发表于 2024-10-25 14:03:49

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成老师 发表于 2024-10-25 14:04:07

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墨香醉 发表于 2024-10-25 15:33:07

通过描绘白霜万里的凄凉之景，以及对人世风雨、黄粱深梦的感慨，表达了一种在沧桑变幻中对人生的深刻思考，既有对自然景象的细腻描写，又有对人生哲理的深沉感悟。

富梅人生 发表于 2024-10-25 16:13:45

欣赏老师佳作

建材 发表于 2024-10-26 16:14:31

三万六千场

栏杆倚遍 发表于 2024-10-26 16:26:13

谢谢老师鼓励！
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