栏杆倚遍 发表于 2025-3-26 17:51:19

偶感一首

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建材 发表于 2025-3-26 17:55:33

有人吗？

成老师 发表于 2025-3-26 18:29:21

欣赏张老师佳作，超赞！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-3-26 18:29:46

情深深雨蒙蒙！

成老师 发表于 2025-3-26 18:30:58

看到桃花粉红得像

初恋情人的脸庞

看到梨花白得像

红颜知己的胸膛

描写细致入微，生动形象！:victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-3-26 18:31:44

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成老师 发表于 2025-3-26 18:32:25

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文明义鸟 发表于 2025-3-26 21:23:49

欣赏学习老师佳作点赞

成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 04:46:54

比喻、拟人等修辞方法用得恰到好处！:victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 04:52:36

诗歌把大自然的媚态与人生的感慨有机地融合在一起了，值得点赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:
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