庸非（陈黎明） 发表于 2025-3-27 15:56:49

倒春寒

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>倒春寒&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>文：庸非</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>沥青上，三月的落叶在打旋，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>被车轮卷起又抛远&mdash;&mdash;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>像一封封被退回的春信。&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>昨夜雷声太沉，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>把夏天寄来的请柬&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>揉碎在积水的凹陷处。&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>此刻，行道树正练习倒叙：&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>褪去青翠，蜷缩成嫩芽，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>再退回种子的黑暗。&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>而信号灯红了又绿，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>车流如迁徙的鱼群，</p><p>又如飘飞的落叶，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>驮着整个季节的犹疑，&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p>游向不确定的深水。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>创作思路：三月落叶，一夜雷雨，似乎把春天迈向炎夏的脚步挡了回来，落叶缤纷，马路上车流如潮，如同飘飞的落叶。春信，请柬，迁徙，&hellip;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250328055614front2_0_1011626_Fo1bWxh5X69FcfBCHZn6gbhHPaKt.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="3000" height="4000" data-qf-origin="forum/20250328055614front2_0_1011626_Fo1bWxh5X69FcfBCHZn6gbhHPaKt.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250328055614front2_0_1011626_Fo1bWxh5X69FcfBCHZn6gbhHPaKt.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20250328055614front2_0_1011626_Fo1bWxh5X69FcfBCHZn6gbhHPaKt.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250327155646front2_0_1011626_FvtvkcqzXJQ7vx30RX86aIvKmTu3.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="750" height="1000" data-qf-origin="forum/20250327155646front2_0_1011626_FvtvkcqzXJQ7vx30RX86aIvKmTu3.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

烏傷桕客 发表于 2025-3-27 16:48:59

写的好！

成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 18:09:25

欣赏非哥佳作，超赞！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 18:11:28

非常文思泉涌，创作特别特别勤奋，作品大丰收，非常值得点赞！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:
一点小小的建议，作品修改可以花些功夫！

成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 18:11:50

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成老师 发表于 2025-3-27 18:12:09

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大美北苑 发表于 2025-3-27 18:20:58

欣赏学习！

满仓 发表于 2025-3-27 23:42:39

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