梨园春色舞芳菲
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p data-pm-slice="1 1 []">梨园春色舞芳菲</p><p> （信华）</p><p>梨园春，干活莫说早</p><p>老农年迈，不辞辛与劳</p><p>根部挖一圈，追完肥封好</p><p>背梯子拿手锯，整枝修剪俏</p><p>晒干树枝捆回家，可当柴火烧</p><p> </p><p>惊蛰过，气温升不少</p><p>尖尖初冒，试着把春闹</p><p>春分节气来，陆续长花苞</p><p>数日含辛孕育，赛家翁鬓角</p><p>白色花瓣尽情开，探头聚枝条</p><p> </p><p>瞅时机，轮番喷洒药</p><p>防虫为首，而后把果保</p><p>零星花散落，从此失依靠</p><p>东风阵阵吹临，亲抚君眉梢</p><p>三月玉树耀星辉，烂漫何以报</p><p> </p><p>仰头枝，花开虽妖娆</p><p>招蜂引蝶，太过于逍遥</p><p>拉弓弯下腰，用绳索缠绕</p><p>改变造型倾力，绑于木桩脚</p><p>双手长出新老茧，精技艺难找</p><p> </p><p>昨如夏，酷暑一般烤</p><p>今倒春寒，疾风骤雨扰</p><p>纯洁醉无瑕，忘却众烦恼</p><p>相伴桃红柳绿，汇齐迎春晓</p><p>梨园春色舞芳菲，憨对路人笑</p> <!----></div> 欣赏潘老师佳作，超赞！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: 精心构思，结构巧妙，妙妙妙，巧巧巧！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: 潘老师的诗歌符合了闻一多先提倡韵律美建筑美，读起来朗朗上口，越读越有味:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 潘老师创作特别特别勤奋，作品质量又高，是文友们学习的光辉榜样！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:老师的佳作越读越有味，赞赞赞！ 好诗欣赏！
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