庸非（陈黎明） 发表于 3 天前

第一次的山水

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p class="">&nbsp;学生第一次完成了一幅山水，有山有水，有房有桥有树有高士，赋诗以鼓励。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">第一次的山水</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">文：庸非</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">第一次的山水，</p><p class="">在宣纸上醒来。</p><p class="">墨色还犹豫，</p><p class="">像初春的薄雾。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">你画下桥，</p><p class="">桥下流水忽然有了方向；</p><p class="">你添上高士，</p><p class="">整座山就学会了呼吸。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">啊，这笨拙的笔触，</p><p class="">多像刚学会走路的溪流！</p><p class="">在留白处跌跌撞撞，</p><p class="">却比完美的摹本更接近云。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250401160013front2_0_1011626_Fm0lXY_LyMy5xvWIPbS59pOrB-e1.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1279" height="1706" data-qf-origin="forum/20250401160013front2_0_1011626_Fm0lXY_LyMy5xvWIPbS59pOrB-e1.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250401160013front2_0_1011626_Fm0lXY_LyMy5xvWIPbS59pOrB-e1.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" data-qf-thumb-origin="forum/20250401160013front2_0_1011626_Fm0lXY_LyMy5xvWIPbS59pOrB-e1.jpg?imageView2/2/w/1080|watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

成老师 发表于 3 天前

欣赏学习！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 3 天前

名师出高徒！

成老师 发表于 3 天前

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大美北苑 发表于 3 天前

欣赏学习！

洪其璜 发表于 3 天前

名师出高徒！

冯康 发表于 3 天前

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冯康 发表于 3 天前

好诗，厉害了
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