成老师 发表于 2025-4-3 18:39:07

清明怀亲

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成老师 发表于 2025-4-3 18:44:39

一年一清明,一岁一追思!

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沧海一粟A 发表于 2025-4-3 19:05:19

清明是一个沉重的节日,是一个为了不让人忘记根本的节日。从而知道自己从哪里来,最终往哪里去!

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方言(岩) 发表于 2025-4-3 19:13:21

整首诗情景交融,开篇以清明细雨营造愁绪氛围,将祭墓怀亲的哀伤与春日的生机盎然相对照,强烈反差中尽显思念之深沉。纸灰、烛火等细节刻画细腻,往昔音容的追思更让无尽情思绵延,动人心弦。

2诗句格律工整,韵脚和谐,用词精妙,“织愁烟”“摇金”“暮衔天”等表述生动形象,既有对清明祭扫场景的真切描绘,又饱含对亲人的绵长思念 ,尽显深厚的文学功底与真挚情感。
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