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七绝·依韵昆仑老师“桃花依旧笑春风”（轱辘体 四章）方向明

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>&nbsp;一</p><p>桃花依旧笑春风，粉靥夭夭映碧空。</p><p>蝶绕蜂喧香满径，韶光独赏意无穷。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>二</p><p>雨霁溪桥柳色葱，桃花依旧笑春风。</p><p>轻舟载酒随波远，醉卧船头看落红。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>三</p><p>小径苔深故迹穷，昔年携手此园中。</p><p>桃花依旧春风笑，独对残红泪眼朦。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>四</p><p>东风送暖意难终，逝水奔流几老翁。</p><p>往事如烟皆作幻，桃花依旧笑春风。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="">附昆仑老师原玉</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">七绝&middot;桃花依旧笑春风/轱辘体四章</p><p class="">昆仑lsm</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">其一</p><p class="">桃花依旧笑春风，破雪冲寒万点红。</p><p class="">不向冰崖争秀色，偏陪小院换新容。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">其二</p><p class="">酥雨轻描芳草绿，桃花依旧笑春风。</p><p class="">离歌未起舟先发，美在武陵香霭中。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">其三</p><p class="">谢尽铅华韵未穷，溪云岭月自从容。</p><p class="">桃花依旧春风笑，漫把芳华泼碧穹。</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">其四</p><p class="">芳心早许入泥中，不叹飘零逐水东。</p><p class="">来岁溪桥明月照，桃花依旧笑春风。</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="">创作感悟:轱辘体不仅是文字游戏，更是时空折叠的艺术。轴句犹如北斗七星，在四维诗境中为每个意象导航，最终让古典形式焕发现代生命质感。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250422205149front2_0_809888_FolqhUqPdkzpf1NHiPCOmV_ndcwe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="614" height="811" data-qf-origin="forum/20250422205149front2_0_809888_FolqhUqPdkzpf1NHiPCOmV_ndcwe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250422205149front2_0_809888_FsnGTNxF_EO3nK5Le9QwctvOL4-0.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="614" height="797" data-qf-origin="forum/20250422205149front2_0_809888_FsnGTNxF_EO3nK5Le9QwctvOL4-0.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250422205148front2_0_809888_FsRyfaEY4XBUTcdKW5vWIbXvA84m.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="614" height="819" data-qf-origin="forum/20250422205148front2_0_809888_FsRyfaEY4XBUTcdKW5vWIbXvA84m.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250422205148front2_0_809888_Fr61yoQzmTbaimsFP2SKTj15B2Y3.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="610" height="803" data-qf-origin="forum/20250422205148front2_0_809888_Fr61yoQzmTbaimsFP2SKTj15B2Y3.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

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