成老师
发表于 2025-4-28 11:41:20
江苏采风作品14：瘦西湖遐想
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成老师
发表于 2025-4-28 11:41:59
分享王和清老师的采风作品《瘦西湖遐想》
玉@芙蓉
发表于 2025-4-28 12:13:34
欣赏学习采风佳作，点赞:victory::victory::victory:
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发表于 2025-4-28 12:13:47
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大美北苑
发表于 2025-4-28 12:37:25
欣赏老师采风佳作，超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:
大美北苑
发表于 2025-4-28 12:37:47
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成老师
发表于 2025-4-28 15:23:42
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